Friday, July 25, 2014

Second Draft revisions...

I am not happy right now.
Just sayin.
Neither are my characters.
And only because after all the critiquing others, 
I returned to their first story in search for stuff which
- after a break and some distance -
can now be safely cut.
I thought.
Maybe not.
Or?
So I opened a new folder and moved all the tidbits there.
Guess what?
Score of teenagers march up and demand to know what happened to their memories!
I wasn't even aware they paid that close attention.
Better come up with some new problems for them tomorrow.
That will keep 'em busy and shut them up for a while.
Until the next revision...
 think it's the ... ?! one by now.
Not sure about that last statement... my heart...